King of the North

Okay this was very well written. It reminded me a great deal of my friends writing, who I think is incredibly talented. I was captivated from the very beginning, your ...

Brilliant in every meaning of the word. I was completely captivated by the well developed characters (for such a short story) and the plot within itself. It was very nice. ...

Thank You BBB. Your review meant a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Hey! I loved this poem when you posted it on Inkbearers and it still amazes me how good it really is. I agree with the above post by "LovablelittleSock". His ...

Okay so this is the first part of the novel I have been writing for two years. Yes I said two years :(. When looking back over this chapter I ...

The first paragraph = awesome. :smile: It really drew me into the story and kept me reading what little bit was left. The fact that you keep the descriptions and ...

I'm intrigued by this. The story seems original and I like the fact that you don't write in the typical third person pov. Complaints: I'm a little disappointed that you ...

Okay so this was my very first attempt at poetry. Its not very good but I figured I would put myself out there. I want to make it clear that ...

Another very good poem. To repeat those above you do have a few spelling errors and grammatical problems. Other than that the poem was extremely well written. Stanzas 2 and ...

I liked this. I agree with those above, the beginning was a lot stronger than the ending. I think one factor to this is that the last stanza is something ...

That was actually interesting. Mrs. Hutton seems like my current english teacher, though she might be a bit nuttier than mine. People like that really have no reason to teach. ...